IELTS Writing Task Chart for The bar chart shows the percentage of international students enrolled in British universities in two years, 1990 and 2014.
the percentage of international students registered in British universities in 2009 and 2014.
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an international
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student
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students
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is depend
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on Brighton
university
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University
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while
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,
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Cardiff
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University
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percentage of international students.
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Basic structure: Add more body paragraphs.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "percentage" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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