The diagram below shows how electricity is generated in a hydroelectric power station. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given diagram illustrates the process of electricity generation in a hydroelectric
power
station
.
Overall
, it can be seen that the main facilities are the dam
and power
station
that control the flow
of water
. Additionally
, the direction of the flow
is different on the day and night.
The Dam
,
is built on the high-level Remove the comma
apply
reservoir
of rivers, operates
differently depending on the time of day. In the daytime, Correct word choice
and operates
intake
of Correct article usage
the intake
dam
Correct article usage
the dam
open
, and Wrong verb form
opens
water
flow
down through the Correct subject-verb agreement
flows
power
station
in order to generate electricity, then
it arrive
Change the verb form
arrives
the
low-level Change preposition
at the
reservoir
. The flow
of water
through the reversible turbines of the power
station
, which operate generator
to produce electricity and through the Add an article
a generator
power
lines to national
grid.
In the night, the whole process is reversed. The reversible turbines of Add an article
the national
power
Correct article usage
the power
station
pump water
from the low-level reservoir
back into the high-level reservoir
. Concurrently, the intake gates of the dam
are closed so that it avoid
Change the verb form
avoids
water
flow
down.Submitted by h14030013 on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words power, station, dam, flow, water, reservoir with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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