You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic: Human activities have negative effects on plants and animal species. Some people think it is too late to do something about the problem, while others believe that effective action can be taken to improve the situation. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words

Nowadays, too many
people
have
discused
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discussed
the harmful
actions
that have
effect
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an effect
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the
enviroment
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environment
and the creatures. Some of them assert that it is
so
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too
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far to deal with
this
situation.
While others
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believe that there are several different kinds of
actions
could
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that could
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be used in order to fix and solve these issues. From my
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perspective
prespective
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i
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believe that it is far from over to let these bad habits
goes
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away and
people
should control them and minimize them as soon as possible. Research has found that countries with massive human
nagitive
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negative
activities
is
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are
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a result of non-fixing these problems and it is the
resonsibility
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responsibility
of the administration. The administration should
plays
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play
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a prominent role in promoting human bad behaviour.
For instance
, In Singapore, the government published
t-shirt
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t-shirts
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with
everysingle
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every single
tickets
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related to
throwning
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throwing
the
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apply
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trash
oll
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all
over the
places
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place
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.
Therefore
,
people
will
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be afriad
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afriad
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afraid
of
broking
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taking
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the role and
payed
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paying
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a significant amount of money.
This
strict rule will encourage an enormous number of
people
to respect the
enviromental
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environmental
environment
and animal spots.
On the other hand
,
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this
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in this
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situation will lead
for
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to
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a serious disaster and the quality of life will
decreased
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so dramatically.
For example
, In Kuwait
people
are used to
throw
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trashes
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trash
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and food cans in the sea. Even
when
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though
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Kuwait has
selected
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been selected
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as an oil country, the level of
the
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bad emissions
such
as gasses and dangerous liquids
are
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is
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significantly increased, it can't be
controled
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controlled
once these bad habits are applied
from
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by
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the
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apply
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society. In conclusion, both of president and
government
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the government
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should cooperate in order to achieve good results. I totally agree with standing next to the
actions
that provide the
improvment
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improvement
of our plant and individuals should select
these situation
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these situations
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as
an
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apply
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essential
actions
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action
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.
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Spelling/Grammar
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Structure
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Supporting Examples
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Understanding of Topic
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