You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic: Human activities have negative effects on plants and animal species. Some people think it is too late to do something about the problem, while others believe that effective action can be taken to improve the situation. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words
Nowadays, too many
people
have discused
the harmful Correct your spelling
discussed
actions
that have effect
the Add an article
an effect
the effect
enviroment
and the creatures. Some of them assert that it is Correct your spelling
environment
so
far to deal with Rephrase
too
this
situation. While others
believe that there are several different kinds of Correct word choice
Others
actions
could
be used in order to fix and solve these issues. From my Correct pronoun usage
that could
Correct your spelling
perspective
prespective
Add a comma
prespective,
i
believe that it is far from over to let these bad habits Change the capitalization
I
goes
away and Change the verb form
go
people
should control them and minimize them as soon as possible.
Research has found that countries with massive human nagitive
activities Correct your spelling
negative
is
a result of non-fixing these problems and it is the Correct subject-verb agreement
are
resonsibility
of the administration. The administration should Correct your spelling
responsibility
plays
a prominent role in promoting human bad behaviour. Change the verb form
play
For instance
, In Singapore, the government published t-shirt
with Fix the agreement mistake
t-shirts
everysingle
Correct your spelling
every single
tickets
related to Fix the agreement mistake
ticket
throwning
Correct your spelling
throwing
the
trash Correct article usage
apply
oll
over the Correct your spelling
all
places
. Fix the agreement mistake
place
Therefore
, people
will Add a missing verb
be afriad
afriad
of Correct your spelling
afraid
broking
the role and Verb problem
taking
payed
a significant amount of money. Wrong verb form
paying
This
strict rule will encourage an enormous number of people
to respect the enviromental
and animal spots.
Correct your spelling
environmental
environment
On the other hand
, procrastinate
Wrong verb form
procrastinating
this
situation will lead Change preposition
in this
for
a serious disaster and the quality of life will Change preposition
to
decreased
so dramatically. Change the verb form
decrease
be decreased
For example
, In Kuwait people
are used to throw
Wrong verb form
throwing
trashes
and food cans in the sea. Even Correct subject-verb agreement
trash
when
Kuwait has Correct word choice
though
selected
as an oil country, the level of Add a missing verb
been selected
the
bad emissions Correct article usage
apply
such
as gasses and dangerous liquids are
significantly increased, it can't be Change the verb form
is
controled
once these bad habits are applied Correct your spelling
controlled
from
Change preposition
by
the
society.
In conclusion, both of president and Correct article usage
apply
government
should cooperate in order to achieve good results. I totally agree with standing next to the Correct article usage
the government
actions
that provide the improvment
of our plant and individuals should select Correct your spelling
improvement
these situation
as Change the determiner
this situation
these situations
an
essential Correct article usage
apply
actions
.Correct the article-noun agreement
action
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Spelling/Grammar
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Structure
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Supporting Examples
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Understanding of Topic
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Balanced Argument
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