The map below is of the town of Canterbury. A new school (S) is planned for the area. The map shows two possible sites for the school. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The map displays the current layout of a city called Canterbury and shows two proposed sites for a new school.
Overall
, what stands out from the picture is that the main difference between the two sites is that one is located in the countryside
outside the town
, whereas
the other is in the town
centre. Both potential sites are close to the main roads.
The town
has a centre with no traffic zone in the middle part of it, which is surrounded by a housing area. The outer zone of this
region is the countryside
, which has one university built on the border between the countryside
and the residential area to
the top of the map.
The first option is situated in the Change preposition
at
countryside
(to the east of the site)and the distance to the nearest city called Sturry which has a population of seven thousand people is also
closer (5 kilometres).
Another proposed location for the construction of a new school is located in the centre of the town
where there is not any traffic and the area near Chartham (7 kilometres) which
is home to 4500 people.Correct pronoun usage
apply
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