Some people think that universities should provide graduates with the knowledge and skills needed in the workplace. Others think that the true function of a university should be to give access to knowledge for its own sake, regardless of whether the course is useful to an employer. What, in your opinion, should be the nwin function of a university?
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Nowadays,
university
policies can be divided into two different aspects. One aspect focuses on supporting students
' needs, while
the other emphasizes the importance of acquiring work
skills
. Other people believe study
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knowledge
is best
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the best
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essay is going to discuss both point
and my opinion.
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students
learn skills
about future working
that will help to get professional Change the form of the verb
work
skills
and speed up the
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apply
society
progress in science. Change noun form
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Firstly
, if students
was
taught Change the verb form
were
work
skill
already by Fix the agreement mistake
skills
university
, they Add an article
the university
a university
easy to
create new Replace the word
easily
idea
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ideas
workplace
. In Add an article
the workplace
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the industrial
industrial revolution
period, some Correct your spelling
Industrial Revolution
businessman
opened technology Fix the agreement mistake
businessmen
academy
to offer kids Fix the agreement mistake
academies
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who
work
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did
skill
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skills
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words
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kids Replace the word
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can
invent new things to make Wrong verb form
could
work
easier. Secondly
, some professional work
need
more Change the verb form
needs
learn
time Change the form of the verb
learning
such
as nuclear technology. Highly specialized jobs require more time to learn, if work
skills
can be learned right from school, technological progress will be accelerated.
Contrarily, some people think learn
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learning
knowledge
in
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at
university
that
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apply
only
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the only
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, students
learn common knowledge
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and maybe
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interests
career
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careers
learn
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students
to find their life purpose. Secondly
, most country
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countries
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societies
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are
worker
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workers
that
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but
also
need different job
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work
such
as writer
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and poet
poet
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poets
society
is going to just only worker
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workers
that
will lose Correct pronoun usage
it
diverse
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a diverse
society
.
In conclusion, there are always two sides to every issue, and this
education issue is no exception, let based on the arguments above,I,on balance,am of the opinion that learn
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learning
work
skill
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skills
university
still carry more weight that
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than
knowledge
.Submitted by m0751102 on
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