The charts below show what UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not go into full-time work did after leaving college in 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant .
The charts compare what graduate and postgraduate
students
did at the end
of their studies in 2008 in the UK .
In the first chart, we can see the numbers of graduate students
and four categories of occupations excluding full-time work
, that they did. Most graduate students
choose to do further
study while
the least choose voluntary work
. These two
categories are numbered 29,665 and 3,500 students
respectively. The other two
types which are mentioned are part-time work
and unemployment. These two
have a similar number of students
approximately 17,000 in each category.
In the second chart, we observe that same as the first chart most graduates choose to do further
study and the least voluntary work
. Those who follow further
study are 2,725 while
those who do voluntary work
are 345. In this
case, part-time workers are numbered at 2,535 and unemployed postgraduates at 1,625.
Overall
there is a significant difference between the two
charts. This
is about the number scale of students
. Otherwise
, the four categories have the same position in both charts.Submitted by sssssraf on
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