The charts below show what UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not go into full-time work did after leaving college in 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant .

The charts below show what UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not go into full-time work did after leaving college in 2008.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant .
The charts compare what graduate and postgraduate
students
did
at the end
of their studies in 2008 in the UK . In the first chart, we can see the numbers of graduate
students
and four categories of occupations excluding full-time
work
, that they did. Most graduate
students
choose to do
further
study
while
the least choose voluntary
work
. These
two
categories are numbered 29,665 and 3,500
students
respectively. The other
two
types which are mentioned are part-time
work
and unemployment. These
two
have a similar number of
students
approximately 17,000 in each category. In the second chart, we observe that same as the first chart most graduates choose to do
further
study and the least voluntary
work
. Those who follow
further
study are 2,725
while
those who do voluntary
work
are 345. In
this
case, part-time workers are numbered at 2,535 and unemployed postgraduates at 1,625.
Overall
there is a significant difference between the
two
charts.
This
is about the number scale of
students
.
Otherwise
, the four categories have the same position in both charts.
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