An international company is offering a temporary job for work experience, write a letter to apply for that job. You need to explain where did you find this information why you want to apply this job what qualification you have what position you want to apply

Dear Sir or Madam, Greetings, I hope
this
email finds you well, I am writing to you to express my interest in the temporary job vacancy that you announced on your website.
Firstly
, I would like to apply for
this
job as I am passionate about volunteering work, I have been working as a volunteer in a local charity organization called WES for one year,
therefore
I have the required experience.
Secondly
, I have
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a bachelor
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bachelor
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degree in social science activities,
hence
my qualifications always
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my ambition toward volunteering work. If I had the opportunity to run my own charity organization, I would apply my vision and thoughts.
Finally
, I would like to suggest that I will be immensely satisfied if I get
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leader role as all
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pervious
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experience I
mentiond
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mentioned
above,
in
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I will help your company to move forward and achieve success in
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period of time. I am looking forward to
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from you soon. Yours faithfully, Ibrahim Ali
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Task Achievement
Be clear about the job position you are applying for right at the beginning of your letter to immediately set the context.
Task Achievement
Though you've conveyed excellent dedication through your experiences, specifying how your skills directly relate to the demands of this job would strengthen your application.
Coherence and Cohesion
You could enhance readability by using a variety of transition words to link your ideas more smoothly.
Greeting and Closing
Your closing remarks and salutation are well-crafted, contributing to a positive tone throughout.
Logical Structure
The structure of your essay, with clear paragraphs for introduction, explaining your interest, detailing your qualifications, and your desired position, demonstrates good organization.
Single Idea per Paragraph
You effectively communicate a single idea per paragraph, making your letter easy to follow.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • job opportunity
  • professional networking site
  • job board
  • referral
  • enthusiasm
  • relevant qualifications
  • certifications
  • previous work experiences
  • suitable candidate
  • career aspirations
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