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The chart below shows the distribution of different income groups in cities and regional centres of Australia. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make a comparison where relevant.

The chart below shows the distribution of different income groups in cities and regional centres of Australia. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make a comparison where relevant.
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The provided bar chart presents the income levels of people who live in the
cities
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 and the regional
centres
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 of Australia.
Overall
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, the revenue amounts were categorised into four groups which were low (40,000
USD
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 or less), lower-middle (40,000-70,000
USD
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), middle (70,000-120,000
USD
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) and high (120,000
USD
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 or more). The top position in the
cities
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 was the middle-income
group
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 which contributed to approximately 35%, meanwhile, it was the second biggest portion at 27% in the regional
centres
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.
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, the lower-middle-income
group
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 which had the highest percentage at 34% in the regional
centres
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 became second place at 30% in the
cities
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.
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, the smallest
group
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 in the
cities
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 was the low-income
group
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 at 12.5%.
On the other hand
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, the high-income
group
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 had the lowest percentage at 15% in the regional
centres
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. There were significant differences in the structure of those areas.
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, the lower-middle-income and middle-income were the main sectors totalling over 65%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words cities, centres, usd, group with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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