With a fast pace of modern life , more and more people are turning towards fast food for theirs main meals . Do you hinh the advantages outweigh the disadvantages ?

The past 50 years have seen a dramatic increase in

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availibility

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availability

of fast

food

. Yet, there remains some disagreement as to whether the

overall

effect of

this

kind of

food

has been positive

and

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or

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negative. Some laud its

convienence

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convenience

and relatively low cost,

however

, in

this

essay

i

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intend to argue that fast

food

is detrimental both to the individuals

that

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consume it and to society at large.  First of all, it is an undeniable fact that consuming fast

food

to excess results in serious health problems. Nourisments

such

as fried chicken,

hamburger

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and chips which are incredibly high in fat and salt are responsible for

such

ailments as high blood pressure, obesity and heart disease.

Moreover

,

although

i

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certainly agree that fast

food

is both affordable and convenient, the cost and inconvenience of treating the illnesses it causes in later life are significant.

In other words

,

while

convenient

food

is beneficial in the

short-term

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short term

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, its long-term effects are generally negative.

Further

and even more importantly, though, some fast

food

chains deliberately attempt to attract children in order to shape their future eating habits. One

particular

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salient example of

this

is the character of Ronald Mcdonald the bright clothes and big smile of the Mcdonalds clown are a beacon to children. Having grown up eating in

Mcdonalds

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Mcdonald's

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restaurants, people are likely to continue eating there throughout their adult lives. It is

also

interesting to note that

Mcdonalds

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McDonald

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provides playgrounds and frequently holds kids' birthday parties in order to attract young children and their parents. By way of conclusion,

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believe that fast

food

will continue to become more popular as the pace of modern life increases. Given the health risks associated with

this

trend,

i

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believe that public education campaigns warning people about the dangers of convenient

food

would be warranted.