The pie charts show the average consumption of food in the world in 2008 compared to two countries; China and India. Write a report to a university lecturer describing the data.
The given pie charts picture information about the
consumption
of food
in the world
in 2008. Compared to two countries china
and Capitalize word
China
India
.
As resealed
by Correct your spelling
revealed
consumption
of animals food
was substantially worldwide 27 and in India
26. The percentage of the average consumption
of vegetables and fruits was 32% in China.On the other hand
, these raw materials only contribute 23% of Indians and 29 % of the world
’s.
People in the world
consumption
41% consumed Replace the word
consumed
food
in 2008 years, this
food
was much popular
Correct quantifier usage
more popular
then
Replace the word
than
others
Correct quantifier usage
other
food
.India
used 39%. Processed food
whereas
Chinese
people ate 5% less than India
.
is worth noticing that Indian
ate more animal foods than Fix the agreement mistake
Indians
Chinese
did Correct article usage
the Chinese
while
Chinese
devoured more vegetables, fruits and seeds than Correct article usage
the Chinese
Indians
. On Correct article usage
the Indians
an
average, Correct article usage
apply
Indian
population consumed more animal foods and Correct article usage
the Indian
seeds
items than the Fix the agreement mistake
seed
world
population while
Chinese
people ate more vegetable
and seeds than the rest of the Fix the agreement mistake
vegetables
world
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Vocabulary: Replace the words consumption, food, world, india, chinese with synonyms.
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