The table below shows the percentage of employers in various sectors having difficulty in finding staff in 2003 and 2004. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The table compares the difficulty for employers to find employees in disparate categories in
two
separate years.
Overall
, It is obvious that in most categories, manufacturing staff were hardest
to find. Meanwhile, Correct article usage
the hardest
service
sector had Add an article
the service
less
problems Change the quantifier
fewer
to find
employees.
Change the verb form
finding
Building
sector Correct article usage
The building
also
suffered a lot in terms of finding human force, besides
manufacturing. In both 2003 and 2004, Correct article usage
the maufacturing
maufacturing
industry had about 3 to 5 per cent more problems Correct your spelling
manufacturing
to find
Change the verb form
finding
skilled
workforce. Simultaneously, these Correct article usage
a skilled
statistices
are Correct your spelling
statistics
also
correct for unskilled ones, with just reduction
of their percentages from 40 to 50 in qualified ones to 20 to 30 in unqualified ones. Correct article usage
a reduction
However
, In terms of technical and managerial staff, building
industry had more problems.
Commerce and services were Correct article usage
the building
two
other sectors with more popularity than two
other industries. In 2003, commerce had between Correct article usage
the two
two
to six per cent more troubles
Fix the agreement mistake
trouble
to find
proficient and unproficient workforce Change the verb form
finding
while
in technical
and managerial section, it faced Correct article usage
the technical
less
troubles. Unlike that, in 2004, Change the quantifier
fewer
service
sector struggled more to find humans to work for.Correct article usage
the service
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