The chart below shows the distribution of different income groups in cities and regional centres of Australia. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make a comparison where relevant.

The chart below shows the distribution of different income groups in cities

and regional centres of Australia.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features,

and make a comparison where relevant.
The bar chart illustrates different categories of average
income
in urban areas and regional
centres
of Australia. It can be seen that urban residents have more population in middle and high
income
and less
lower
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low
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middle and
low
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low-income
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income
categories in comparison with regional
centres
.
Low
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Low-income
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income
group is approximately 13% of society in
cities
while
this
rate is around 22% in regional
centers
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centres
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.
Lower
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The lower
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middles
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middle
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income
group is 30% in
cities
and the latter is less than 35%. Middle
income
in
cities
is 35% which
this
rate is about 8% less than regional
centres
.
Furthermore
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people with
high
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the high
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average
income
in
cities
is 20% and the percentage for the regional
centres
is just 15%.
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