The charts below show the percentages of men and women aged 60-64 in employment in four countries in 1970 and 2000 Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.

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bar chart illustrates the employment rate of

elderly

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the elderly

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according to

gender in four different states in 1970 and 2000. In general,

men

became dominant in

workplace

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the workplace

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for elder people in all representative states in each continent. In 1970, most elderly work field was occupied by

men

, especially in Japan, where 84

percent

of the old

worker

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workers

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were

men

and just 16

percent

of them were women.

This

situation

also

happened in Belgium, Australia, and

USA

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which

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where

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male

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males

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accounted

over

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70

percent

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of elder employment.

This

pattern slowly changed in 2000. Female

worker

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workers

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continued to increase in each country, and even overtaking male

worker

domination.

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, in Belgium, only 19

percent

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of old

worker

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workers

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were

men

,

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remaining 81

percent

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were women. It

also

occurred in two

others

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states where women eventually became

majority

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the majority

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in work place in early 2000. But Japan was still dominated by old

men

back

then

.