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The line graph differ the amount of nitrogen oxide by four types of vehicles. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisions where relevant

The line graph differ the amount of nitrogen oxide by four types of vehicles. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisions where relevant
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The chart depicts the number of nitrogen oxide in various
vehicals
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vehicles
 like Diesel
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car
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cars
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, Petrol
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car
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cars
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, Lorries and Buses.
Overall
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, it is clearly apparent, that all groups of
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the car
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car
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cars
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 had
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an upwward
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upwward
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upward
chart
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charts
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 beside
Diesel
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Diesel's
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car
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cars
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. It presents that
inceasing
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increasing
 in
kilometer
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 per hour has increased the nitrogen oxide emission throughout the period.
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, it clearly
illustrate
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illustrates
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the oppsite
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oppsite
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opposite
 in
case
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the case
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 of Diesel
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car
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cars
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.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
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Basic structure: Add more body paragraphs.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words car with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • emissions
  • nitrogen oxide
  • vehicle types
  • observed period
  • significant increase/decrease
  • emission levels
  • intersections
  • overtakes
  • largest/smallest emitter
  • conclude
  • overall trend
  • emission rankings
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