The line graph differ the amount of nitrogen oxide by four types of vehicles. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisions where relevant
The chart depicts the number of nitrogen oxide in various
vehicals
like Diesel Correct your spelling
vehicles
car
, Petrol Fix the agreement mistake
cars
car
, Lorries and Buses.
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cars
Overall
, it is clearly apparent, that all groups of Add an article
the car
car
had Fix the agreement mistake
cars
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an upwward
upwward
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upward
chart
beside Fix the agreement mistake
charts
Diesel
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Diesel's
car
. It presents that Fix the agreement mistake
cars
inceasing
in Correct your spelling
increasing
kilometer
per hour has increased the nitrogen oxide emission throughout the period. Change the spelling
kilometre
However
, it clearly illustrate
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illustrates
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the oppsite
oppsite
in Correct your spelling
opposite
case
of Diesel Correct article usage
the case
car
.Fix the agreement mistake
cars
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