The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.
The charts illustrate
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water
usage and its purposes in six different locations around the world. Overall
it is clear that
water
is used it
mostly for agricultural demands. Correct pronoun usage
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By contrast
, the water
use of public
tends to be the least in these areas.
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Firstly
, in Central and South East Asia the water
consumption is highly similar, occupying most of the chart at 88% and 81% respectively. Also
, the water
used for factories is slightly more in South East Asia similarly
water
in Africa and South America is mostly used for agricultural purposes at 84% and 71% eachAdd the comma(s)
, in addition,
in addition
the water
consumed in South America is twice as much as it is in Africa besides
the industrial water
consumption in South America East side more than in the
Africa.Correct article usage
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