The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.

The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.
The charts illustrate
the
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water
usage and its purposes in six different locations around the world.
Overall
it is clear that
water
is used
it
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mostly for agricultural demands.
By contrast
, the
water
use of
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tends to be the least in these areas.
Firstly
, in Central and South East Asia the
water
consumption is highly similar, occupying most of the chart at 88% and 81% respectively.
Also
, the
water
used for factories is slightly more in South East Asia
similarly
water
in Africa and South America is mostly used for agricultural purposes at 84% and 71% each
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in addition
the
water
consumed in South America is twice as much as it is in Africa
besides
the industrial
water
consumption in South America East side more than in
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Africa.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 70%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words water with synonyms.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • consumption
  • irrigation
  • domestic
  • industrial
  • regional disparity
  • economic structure
  • sustainable management
  • water-scarce
  • population density
  • urbanization
  • data trends
  • resource allocation
  • percentage distribution
  • extremes
  • variations
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