The chart below shows information about calorie consumption in seven countries in 1975 and 2000. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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table illustrates the propotion
of calorie intake in the US, India, New Zealand, Somalia, Correct your spelling
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