The chart below shows information about calorie consumption in seven countries in 1975 and 2000. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows information about calorie consumption in seven countries in 1975 and 2000. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The chart below shows information about calorie consumption in seven countries in 1975 and 2000. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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of calorie intake in the US, India, New Zealand, Somalia,
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the period
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1975 and 2000.

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
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Vocabulary: Only 2 basic words for charts were used.
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