the map below shows an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the maine feature and make comparison where relevant.

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The given map illustrates the planned developments of an

idustrial

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industrial

site in Norbiton in the near future.

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, all the factory

area

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areas

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will be replaced by housing societies in

coming

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the coming

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time. Many

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amenities

ammenties

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amenities

such

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schools

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school

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schools

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play ground

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playgrounds

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and shops will be developed as per the

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blueprint

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blue print

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blueprint

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Town

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The town

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boundary will not be extended, it will remain the same.

Firstly

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, It is observable that

road

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the road

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network will be extended in the northern direction until farmland to

accomodate

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accommodate

homes.

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, one more junction will be introduced

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the south end of the road. School will be introduced in the

south east

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southeast

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part of the town.

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to that, shops and medical

centre

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centres

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will be opened on opposite sides of the central junction. Multiple

hosing

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housing

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complex

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complexes

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are

getting

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being

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developed to

accomodate

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accommodate

multiple people in almost

each

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every

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direction of the town.

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