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The diagrams below shew the life cycle of the silkworm and the stages in the production of silk cloth.  Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons were relevant.

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The charts present the life process of a silkworm
as well as
 the steps in manufacturing
silk
 cloth.
Overall
, there are 4 stages in
silkworm's
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the silkworm's
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 life and 6 phases in
creation
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the creation
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 of cloth made of
silk
.
To begin
 with,
moth
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the moth
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 lays
the
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their
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 eggs on leaves after which in 10 days the larvae hatch from it and begin consuming mulberry
leaf
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leaves
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 to sustain themselves. Following 4-6 weeks, the larvae coat themselves in
silk
 thread and
further
 cocoon themselves in 3-8 days.
Finally
, after 16 days a fully matured moth exits the cocoon to continue its life cycle. The second diagram begins with the selection of
silk
 threads and it's boiling in water in the second step.
Following
this
, the boiled
string
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strings
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 are unwinded after which they are twisted and dyed into some color.
Finally
, in the final step they are weaved
to
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 silks and the
last
 three steps are repeated for good quality.
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clarity
Ensure precision in terminology for clarity, such as using 'silk moth' instead of 'moth' to avoid ambiguity.
coherence
Try to include a broader range of linking words for smoother transitions between ideas.
structure
Incorporating a brief conclusion or summary statement can enhance the overall impact of the essay.
structure
Effective use of the overview to present the main stages succinctly.
coherence
Clear and logically structured description of the processes.
content
Relevant and specific details provided for both life cycle and production processes.

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