Task 1: The graph below shows the number of overseas visitors who came to the UK for different purposes between 1989 and 2009.
The line graph shows how many international
traveller
visited Change to a plural noun
travellers
to
the UK for different reasons
between 1989 and 2009.
Remove the preposition
apply
Overall
, the number of overseas travellers who went to the UK for several purposes increased in 20 years. For certain reasons,specifically. Holiday ended up as the most popular, whereas
Meeting Friends and Relatives was the least widely visited. At the start of the period, among the purposes of international travellers to the UK, the Holiday was ranked first,
at roughly 6.5 million, followed by the number of Business and Meeting Friends and Relatives visitors were 5 million and around 3.5 million respectively.Submitted by hamzayevasamina on
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Basic structure: Add more body paragraphs.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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