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The table below gives information about a restaurant's average sales in three different branches in 2016. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant

The table below gives information about a restaurant's average sales in three different branches in 2016. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant
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The table depicts data about performances in three restaurants in Vancouver, in 2016, classified into five characteristics, namely the number of transactions, costs, the quantity of plates that were eaten in and taken away
as well as
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 their most popular food.
Overall
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,
Georgia
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Street
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 was the most preferred place for having a meal
while
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 the least chosen was Drake
Street
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.
Besides
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, the cheapest was
Dunsmuir
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Street
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,
however
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,
Georgia
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Street
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 was the most expensive.
Although
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chicken
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 was the feature in common among the plates that were prepared, there were different types of main courses. In detail, 854 sales were completed in
Georgia
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Street
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, followed by 390 transactions in Vancouver
Dunsmuir
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Street
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.
Consequently
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, the items sold were directly proportional to their initial estimation of purchases in which the lowest was in Drake
Street
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 and
Dunsmuir
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Street
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 was at the middle point.
On the other hand
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, prices were between $5.61 and $10.69, the cheapest shown in
Dunsmuir
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Street
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.
Finally
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, the most popular items were
chicken
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 burgers,
chicken
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 wings and
chicken
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 pasta in
Georgia
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,
Dunsmuir
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 and Drake restaurants, respectively.
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words georgia, street, dunsmuir, chicken with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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