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The given graph shows the past and projected figures of the government spending as a percentage of GDP for the years 2000 to 2025 in three areas. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The given graph shows the past and projected figures of the government spending as a percentage of GDP for the years 2000 to 2025 in three areas. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph shows the past and projected figures of the administration's expenditure as a percentage of
GDP
 for the years between 2000 and 2005 in three places. 
Overall
, the spending on
GDP
 for education , roads, and railways decreased,
while
 the
GDP
 for health increased with some fluctuations.  As the graph shows,
spending
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the spending
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 of
GDP
 for health started in 2000, and it was 4% after it increased sharply until the end, and it will be 7.5% in 2025. Regarding
GDP
 expenditure on roads and railways, it was 5% when it began in 2000. Next fell over between 2000 and 2025 years. The trend was just under 4% in 2025.
Afterward
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, in 2000, roads and railways were at 4%, after a small increase of about 4.5% in 2005.
Then
, it decreased to 3% in 2010 and rose to 4% in 2020. Afterwards, it decreased by about 3.5% in 2025.
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