The diagram below shows the production and processing of milk production for commercial sale. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words

The process diagram illustrates the

manifacturing

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manufacturing

of

milk

production for local stores.

Overall

, there is

main

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a main

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resource as

milk

and 3 machines which will manufacture

daily

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dairy

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products,

also

there are 7 steps which can be shortened into main 4 steps. Beginning with preparing cows for milking and ending up with delivering the products to supermarkets. To commence with, farmers will prepare cows for milking by grazing them,

then

they will go through the milking machine twice a day.

After

this

milk

will be held in

special

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a special

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machine called refrigeration storage for days,

then

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and then

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it will be delivered by tanker to

dairy

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the dairy

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. There it would appear as cheese,

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or

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butter or it would stay as

milk

and will be pasteurized and packaged. The process

is finishing

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finishes

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by

saling

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selling

the ready

stuffs

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stuff

kinds of stuff

pieces of stuff

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in shops and markets.