The chart below shows the amount of leisure time enjoyed by men and women of different employment status.
The bar chart demonstrates the amount of free
time
within a week between males and females in the time
period from 1998 to 1999.
Overall
, the men’s leisure time
was more than women’s free time
only in 3 categories from five categories, namely employed full time
, unemployed and retired. In the other two classifications, there is no data about men’s free time
such
as employed part-time
and housewives.
In employed full-timetime
men had about 50 Correct your spelling
full-time time
full-time-time
hours
, while
women had 38 hours
in this
time
. However
, the categories for unemployed males and females were exactly the same as those for retired individuals between about 85 and 75 hours
in the time
period within a week respectively. Employed part-time
had a rest of four hundred hours
and housewives had more than 20 hours
than employees.
Finally
, they enjoyed forty-eight hours
. There is not any data for the 2figures
which were housewives and unemployed.Correct your spelling
2 figures
Submitted by makemoneyizzy16 on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
▼
Introduction: The introduction is missing.
▼
Introduction: Change the first sentence in the introduction.
▼
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
▼
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
▼
Vocabulary: Replace the words time, hours with synonyms.
▼
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "amount" in your introduction.
▼
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 2 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.
▼
Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+
Learn how to write high-scoring essays with powerful words.Download Free PDF and start improving you writing skills today!