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The table shows a breakdown of the most popular languages taken by native English speakers studying at the UK Centre for the Foreign Language Learning in 2020. Summarise the charts by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The table shows a breakdown of the most popular languages taken by native English speakers studying at the UK Centre for the Foreign Language Learning in 2020. Summarise the charts by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph illustrates the data about the most preferred for usage
languages
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 between English students who studied at the
UK
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Centre
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 for Foreign
Language
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 Learning during the 2020 year. Broadly, it can be seen that the majority of female students used the Mandarin
language
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, which is equal to 27 per
cent
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,
while
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 male learners stopped in the Arabic
language
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, around 22 per
cent
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. As the data suggests, there were 9 types of
languages
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, which is used by the English society in the
UK
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Centre
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 in 2020. Interestingly, both feminine and masculine people in the
UK
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Centre
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 spoke the Spanish
language
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in
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 the same level, which is 19 per
cent
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 of the whole
both
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on both
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 sides.
Additionally
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, it can be demonstrated that women preferred to speak in Arabic, French and Polish
languages
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 approximately identical percentage, nearly 10 per
cent
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 of the
overall
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 number. On the other side, the analysis shows that men have been involved in the Mandarin, German and Japanese
Languages
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 in equal proportion, around 12 per
cent
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 of guys.
Finally
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, it is important to show that slightly less popular
languages
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 among the female half of
UK
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centre
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 speakers were Italian and Welsh
languages
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, just 3-4 per
cent
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,
while
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 for the male half it was Polish
language
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, equal 3 per
cent
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.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words languages, uk, centre, language, cent with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • breakdown
  • native English speakers
  • UK Centre for Foreign Language Learning
  • main features
  • comparisons
  • most popular
  • significance
  • notable trends
  • reflected in
  • traditional preferences
  • least popular
  • perceived difficulty
  • potential implications
  • geographical proximity
  • cultural ties
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