The two pie charts below show the percentage of industry sectors contribution to the economy of Turkey in 2000 and 2016
The two pie charts represent the rate of industry consumption
to
the economy of Turkey in Change preposition
in
years
between 2000 and 2016 .
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the years
Overall
, at the beginning of the period agriculture was
contributed the most significant Unnecessary verb
apply
part
of the economy and construction was concentrated the least part
. In comparison at the end
of the period the
health care and education were made up the biggest Correct article usage
apply
part
and finance business
and Fix the agreement mistake
businesses
other
were the least significant Fix the agreement mistake
others
part
of the economy.
It is interesting to notice that construction was 3
% contribution sector in 2000 Correct article usage
a 3
then
it had slight
growth of 7% into thousand 2016. Correct article usage
a slight
moreover
, manufacturing was 8% in 2000 after that it had
rose by 12% in 2016. Unnecessary verb
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Furthermore
trade utilities and transportation where accounted for 14% in 2000 Add a comma
Furthermore,
then
it increased with
2% in 2016. Change preposition
to
As well as
finance business and other where 5% then
experience upward trend by 3%.
It be
easily seen that agriculture was 24% of Change the verb form
is
contribution
sector in 2000 , fill to 14% in 2016. In 2000, was 12%. Correct article usage
the contribution
then
it has
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had
slight
decrease Correct article usage
a slight
by
3% in 2016. leisure Change preposition
of
were
17% in 2000 , declined to 14% in 2016. Change the verb form
was
In
contrast
healthcare and education Add a comma
contrast,
Correct your spelling
remained
remaned
stable in both years at 17%.Correct your spelling
remained
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