The two pie charts below show the percentage of industry sectors contribution to the economy of Turkey in 2000 and 2016

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The two pie charts represent the rate of industry consumption

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the economy of Turkey in

years

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the years

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between 2000 and 2016 .

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, at the beginning of the period agriculture

was

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contributed the most significant

part

of the economy and construction was concentrated the least

part

. In comparison

at the end

of the period

the

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health care and education were made up the biggest

part

and finance

business

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businesses

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and

other

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others

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were the least significant

part

of the economy. It is interesting to notice that construction was

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% contribution sector in 2000

then

it had

slight

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growth of 7% into thousand 2016.

moreover

, manufacturing was 8% in 2000 after that it

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rose by 12% in 2016.

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trade utilities and transportation where accounted for 14% in 2000

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it increased

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2% in 2016.

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finance business and other where 5%

then

experience upward trend by 3%. It

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easily seen that agriculture was 24% of

contribution

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the contribution

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sector in 2000 , fill to 14% in 2016. In 2000, was 12%.

then

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slight

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decrease

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3% in 2016. leisure

were

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17% in 2000 , declined to 14% in 2016.

contrast

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healthcare and education

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remained

remaned

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remained

stable in both years at 17%.

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The two pie charts below show the percentage of industry sectors contribution to the economy of Turkey in 2000 and 2016

Describe how you manage your time when you are both planning and coordinating activities in your personal schedule.

Many elderly people are no longer looked after by their families but are put in care homes or nursing homes. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend and what is your opinion?

Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

some people say that that adversiting is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things.other people think that advertining is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both views and give your opinoin

Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree? What other measures do you think might be effective?