The graph below shows the quantities of goods transport in the UK between 1974 and 2002 by four different modes of transport.

The graph below shows the quantities of goods transport in the UK between 1974 and 2002 by four different modes of transport.
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quantities of
goods
were transported in the UK
during
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1971 and 2002.
Overall
, there was a common increase in the quantities of
goods
transported
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road, water, and pipeline, except for rail, with road witnessing the most dramatic rise.
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pipeline
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was the least popular in all ways. The number of
goods
transported in the UK by road started at around 70
tonnes
of
goods
, after which ended up thriving to almost 100
tonnes
.
While
, the figure for water was under 40
tonnes
in 1974, followed by a growth to over 60
tonnes
in 2002.
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, exactly 40
tonnes
of quantities of
goods
were carried
through
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rail, with a subsequent drop to under 40
tonnes
between 1978 and 1998, and a final rise to the same number as the beginning. The figure for
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pipeline
saw
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growth at the initial time was over 20
tonnes
,
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after
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witnessed a decline to 20
tonnes
.
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