The graph shows the results of a survey of British public figures that people can recognise from their photographs. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph shows the results of a survey of British public figures that people can recognise from their photographs. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The chart illustrates the percentage of
people
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by
age
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range, who are able to identify British celebrities from pictures.
Overall
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,
it is clear that
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everybody can
recognise
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the Queen of England,
while
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the
Chancellor
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and the
Mayor
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of London are the least to be recognised. Concerning the Queen, all
age
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ranges are able at 100% to identify her, except
people
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aged 0 to 20 who are able at nearly 95% to
recognise
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her.
In addition
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,
people
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aged 41 to 60 represent the highest percentage
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recognise
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all British public figures,
such
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as the Prime minister at 90%, the
Chancellor
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at 70% and the
Mayor
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of London at 60%.
Additionally
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, only 20% of
people
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aged between 0 to 20 can identify respectively the
Chancellor
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and the
Mayor
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.
Moreover
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, concerning the
Chancellor
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,
age
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ranges between 41 and 60 and 61 and older are equal with 70% each,
whereas
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concerning the
Mayor
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of London,
people
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aged 21 to 40 and 41 to 60 are equally able to
recognise
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him.
However
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,
Therefore
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, the
Mayor
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is the public figure with the lowest percentage of recognition through all
age
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ranges.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words people, age, recognise, chancellor, mayor with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
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