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The graph shows estimated oil production capacity for several Gulf countries between 1990 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph shows estimated oil production capacity for several Gulf countries between 1990 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given bar chart illustrates
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oil
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production
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 for many countries in
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 East from 1990 to 2010. In general, it is obvious Saudi Arabia
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highest
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the highest
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oil
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production
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 for
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,
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subsequently
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 it is considered
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 estimates that first among
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lowest
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the lowest
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for
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apply
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production
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 of fossil fuel from 1990 to 2010.
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, Saudi Arabia
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has
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 sharply
an
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apply
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increase
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increased
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oil
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production
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,
therefore
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 in 2000 was approximately 9 ,
whaile
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while
 In 2010 almost 14.5 a
raise
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rise
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presentage
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of
 about 5%. Iran is second in the chart Its
production
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 reached in 2010 a 4.5 ,
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 not exceeding Saudi
Arabia
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Arabia's
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oil
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production
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 in 1990. In
constrat
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contrast
, UAE , Kuwait and
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Qatar
not
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do not
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 exceed 4 million per day ;
fortherefore
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therefore
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,
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this
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 countries have a surge
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production
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in production
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.
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While
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 Iraq
have
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had
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oil
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production
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 in 1990
about
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 2 million per day , after
fiftten
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fifteen
-years reached 3 million dramatically a skyrocket
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words oil, production with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • estimated
  • oil production capacity
  • Gulf countries
  • period between 1990 and 2010
  • main features
  • comparisons
  • significant increase
  • decrease
  • relatively stable
  • overall trend
  • highest production capacity
  • lowest production capacity
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