The diagram below show how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and making comparisons where relevant

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The diagram

illustrated

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how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity. It was called

"Geothermal

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a "Geothermal

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power plant" which produced

eectricity

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electricity

in the past

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but

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not use

this

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progression at the moment.

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geothermal

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a geothermal

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power plant has 5 stages which are named after cold water,

teh

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the

injection well,

teh

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the

production well,

condenser

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the condenser

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andgenerator

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and generator

generator

turbine.

First

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figure described that cold water

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is pumpued

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pumpued

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pumped

down into 4.5 km depth and in the next stage, it

transmitted

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to the third process which has surrounded by hot rocks within

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name

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named

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geothermal

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the geothermal

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zone.

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, hot water

pumped

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up which has navigated directly to the condenser.

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, in the

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term of progress, substant has carried to generator turbine and has powered by

stream

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the stream

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, it has prepared the

least

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last

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stage which

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turbine

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the turbine

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and

start

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starts

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to produce electricity.

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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.

Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.

Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 75%.

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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

135 words

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