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The two line graphs below show New Zealand import figures from Australia and Japan in the years 1994 - 2004. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The two line graphs below show New Zealand import figures from Australia and Japan in the years 1994 - 2004. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The provided diagrams depict New Zealand importation from both
Australia
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 and
Japan
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 in 10 years from 1994 to 2004.
Overall
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, despite some fluctuations, the
amount
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 of importation from
Australia
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 and
Japan
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 increased and decreased, respectively,
in addition
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, the
amount
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 of entry from
Australia
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 was more than the importation from
Japan
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,
overall
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. New Zealand's
imports
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 from
Australia
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 were about 4000
million
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dollars
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 in 1994 and they increased to just over 6000
million
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dollars
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 in 1996.
Then
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, after some waves it touched the lowest
amount
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 of exactly 3000
million
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dollars
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 in 1999. After that,
although
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 the
imports
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 from
Australia
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 experienced some fluctuations, they had an upward trend,
overall
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 and reached the highest
amount
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 exactly 8000
million
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dollars
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 in 2004. The number of
imports
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 from
Japan
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 was 3000
million
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dollars
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 in 1994 and
then
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, it saw an upward tendency and touched the highest value just upper than 6000
million
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dollars
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 in 1997 which was lower than the highest value of
imports
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 from
Australia
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. After that, it saw some waves but
overall
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 it was a downward trend and
finally
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 touched the lowest
amount
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 of
imports
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 exactly 2000
million
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dollars
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 in 2004.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "overall".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words australia, japan, amount, imports, million, dollars with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "waves" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "fluctuations" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • trend analysis
  • fluctuations
  • peaks
  • troughs
  • significant changes
  • consistency
  • variations
  • overall growth
  • decline
  • diverge
  • converge
  • spiked
  • economic policies
  • trade agreements
  • global economic events
  • predictive insights
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