Eating too much sugar is harmful to health. Some people think it is the government’s responsibility to limit people’s sugar consumption, while others think it is an individual’s responsibility to limit the amount of sugar they eat. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Consuming too much

sugar

exposes individuals' health to danger, it is scientifically evident that if we do not monitor the

amount

of

sugar

we eat, we are likely to be patients of many chronic diseases.

While

some argue that

this

is the

government

’s

responsibility

to counter

this

phenomenon, others believe that it depends on individuals, I would argue that

this

is a shared

responsibility

.

Firstly

, those who opine that the

government

should limit

sugar

consumption say that if the

government

sets some clear rules and harsh restrictions, that would deter the detrimental effects of overeating

sugar

.

For example

, imposing high taxes on products that contain a certain

amount

of

sugar

,

moreover

, presenting some labels on goods to refer to the nutrition facts,

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furthermore

, leading local

campaings

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campaigns

campaign

to raise

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folks

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awareness about the malignant consequences of overusing

sugar

.

Although

these instructions seem to be repeated,

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could play a vital role in

this

issue.

Therefore

, there must be a law and fines for companies or organizations who breach

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these

health rules.

On the other hand

, individuals have an inevitable

responsibility

to control the

amount

of

sugar

they eat daily, all these rules and

government

plans mentioned above will not be effective without cooperation from society.

For instance

, folks must take

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consideration that obesity is the main cause of many chronic diseases

such

as diabetes and

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pressure

,

therefore

they must limit the

amount

of

sugar

they consume,

additionally

, those who run giant companies that work in the feeding business have a social

responsibility

and an indispensable role to play by considering working with healthy goods

instead

of other sugary ones even though they gain more profits from them. In conclusion,

although

overusing

sugar

seems to be a personal choice and an individual's taste, I believe that it is a grave danger that the

government

and folks have the complete

responsibility

to encounter.