You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The line graph below shows the percentage of tourists to England who visited four different attractions in Brighton. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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The line graph displays the
ratio
of tourists in England who went to the Brighton landmarks between 1980 and 2010 with a five-year gap.
Firstly
, people who visited art gallery had increased from 1980 to 1985 and its ratio
changed from nearly 20 per cent
to close to 40 per cent
but its reputation rapidly declined in 25 years and its percentage was under 10 per cent
in 2010. The popularity of the pavilion rose from nearly 24 per cent
to 50 rate between 1980 and 1995. However
, the pavilion lost its popularity and its ratio
decreased to 30 per cent
in 2010.
Secondly
, the pier's ratio
had started at 10 per cent
and its rate increased to more than 20 per cent
in 30 years. Festivsal ratio
had not changed too much in 30 years, its initial ratio
was 30 per cent
and its ratio
had decreased to nearly 27 per cent
.
To sum up
, the reputation of some attractions had changed drastically such
as the pavilion and art gallery but the percentage of tourists who visited the festival nearly were the same.Submitted by atakantemizkan0 on
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