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Directors of organization earned much higher salaries, the ordinary employees do some people think it’s necessary, but others are of the opinion that it’s on discuss both this use and give your opinion

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The debate over time is the fact that higher positions deservedly are more productive in terms of income compared with ordinary
staff
,
while
 others have been frustrated with disagreements.
Although
 by the way of being well-paid
boss
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bosses
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 stimulate their employees to be as qualified as
they
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, the definition in price might be able to demotivate the regular workers. One of the priority aspects is that well-paid executives are able to be involved in
lower
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pointed man
such
 skills as intellectual competitiveness and aspiration.
In other words
, ordinary
staff
 will try to not only earn as much money as their boss but
also
 replace them by copying their
knowledgeFor
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knowledge
 example: in universities professors’ salaries are much higher compared to teachers. In order to motivate basic tutors institutes have given permission for privileges and financial resources.
As a result
, they became more productive and will have been prepared for the future.
Thus
, prone
of
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 higher profit grows in
staff
's sense of competitiveness
as well as
 determination.
On the other hand
, if the difference between top executives and office workers is taken as too wide, it can demotivate the workforce. Employees might feel undervalued, which could impact their productivity and loyalty to the company. In
this
 case, companies will not be able to have neither profit nor work atmosphere.
As a consequence
, my mom director of a company frustrated with the situation. There were two people whose knowledge was similar,
while
 the first kept his place for years second had met with a lack of stimulation
due to
 the difference
salary
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 between them.
Thus
, per cent of Definitions among all positions might
also
 be able to lack motivation. In conclusion, by taking both sides into account I consider
although
 higher posts ought to have Definitions in the salary compared with ordinary
staff
, it might be able to demotivate them by sacrificing their value
as well as
 abilities.
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Use of Examples
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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