The graph below gives information from a 2008 report about consumption of energy in the USA since 1980 with projections until 2030. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below gives information from a 2008 report about consumption of energy in the USA since 1980 with projections until 2030.

summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram illustrates the number of using Fuel from 1980 to 2030 in the USA.the amount of Petrol and Oil was a boom between 1980-2024 and it is expected to rise in 2030. The number of coal-using by almost 15 units experienced an increase
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2024 and
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Natural Gas-using by 20 with a
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stood at approximately 23 in 2024. these 3 items
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are Nuclear,Solar and Hydropower started by nearly 5% and increased slowly till2024 by almost 10 per cent. it is expected to
rise
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Petrol and Oil and
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Coal orders by 35% and 25% ;
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, Natural Gas will stay at 23%.it is expected to constant the amount of Nuclear, Solar,
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by under 5 per cent. In general Petrol and OIL
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Coal experienced the biggest amount and they will have
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the highest
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2030.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "rise" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.

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  • energy consumption
  • projections
  • renewable energy
  • non-renewable resources
  • sustainable
  • fossil fuels
  • nuclear energy
  • biofuels
  • hydroelectric power
  • solar energy
  • wind energy
  • trends
  • increases/decreases
  • shifts
  • milestones
  • significant
  • forecast
  • implications
  • sustainable development
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