The chart below gives information about the percentage of male and female teacher in six different kind of education setting in UK in 2010.

The chart below gives information about the percentage of male and female teacher in six different kind of education setting in UK in 2010.
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the men and women
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in six various educational settings in the United Kingdom in the year 2010.
Overall
, The contribution of female teachers dominated male teachers in three different
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sectors
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and vice versa. On the one hand,
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of women lecturers in Nursery/
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and Primary school had the highest percentage with nearly 95% and 93%
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respectively
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On the contrary
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with nearly 2% and 9% respectively.
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equal proportion of both educators are visible in college with approximately 50%.
On the other hand
, Private training
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and
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had
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higher
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teachers compared to females with 7% and nearly double (65%). In Secondary
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males are less compared to females with 44% and 50% respectively.
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