The chart below gives information about the percentage of male and female teacher in six different kind of education setting in UK in 2010.
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the men and women Change preposition
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lecturer's percentage
in six various educational settings in the United Kingdom in the year 2010.
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lecturers
Overall
, The contribution of female teachers dominated male teachers in three different secters
and vice versa.
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sectors
sections
involvement
of women lecturers in Nursery/Correct article usage
the involvement
Pre-school
and Primary school had the highest percentage with nearly 95% and 93% Correct your spelling
preschool
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respectively
On the contrary
, men were least
with nearly 2% and 9% respectively. Correct article usage
the least
And
equal proportion of both educators are visible in college with approximately 50%.
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institutes
University
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Universities
the
higher Correct article usage
a
male
teachers compared to females with 7% and nearly double (65%). In Secondary Correct quantifier usage
number of male
school
males are less compared to females with 44% and 50% respectively.Add a comma
school,
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