You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Write a report summarizing the information. Select and describe the main features and make comparisons where relevant. The line chart below shows the per capita meat consumption in four different countries (USA, UK, Brazil, and India) from 1985 to 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. The graph below shows the consumption of 4 kinds of meat in European Countries from 1979 to 2004.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

Write a report summarizing the information. Select and describe the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The line chart below shows the per capita meat consumption in four different countries (USA, UK, Brazil, and India) from 1985 to 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the consumption of 4 kinds of meat in European Countries from 1979 to 2004.
This
graph shows us the four kinds of
meat
that European countries consume,
chicken
,
beef
, lamb and
finally
fish
. The graph shows from 1979 to 2004.
Overall
it's evident that Europeans consume a lot of
meat
, but the
chicken
since 1990 started skyrocketing to levels almost unachievable.
On the other
hand
Add a comma
hand,
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we can see that the least consumed products are
fish
and lamb
while
beef
fluctuated but after
that
Add a comma
that,
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it went on a skyfall. In 1979,
Fish
was the
meat
that was less consumed with a little more than 50,
on the other hand
with a little more than 200
its
Correct pronoun usage
it
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the
beef
,
chicken
and lamb were almost the same at 150 each. After that
fish
fluctuated between 1984 and 1989 but in those years
fish
was
also
the
meat
less consumed,
beef
fluctuated between 1979 and 1984 but after 1984 we can see a significant fall, The highest peak that
beef
reached was almost 250 in the year 1984, in a different light we can see that the
chicken
in the early 2000 reached its climax. Peculiarly In 1989
the
Correct article usage
apply
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chicken
and
beef
were almost in the same range but the European people started consuming a lot more
chicken
than
beef
.
Fish
is always almost the same always being the less consumed but
its
Replace the word
it's
it is
show examples
always reliable to get a good meal.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "on the other hand".
Basic structure: Use less body paragraphs.
Vocabulary: Replace the words meat, chicken, beef, fish with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "fluctuated" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "a little more than" was used 2 times.
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