The pie charts shows the number of native speakers of different languages in canada in 1996,2006 and 2016. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.

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pie chart represents the proportion of Canadian folks speaking several other

languages

in the

year

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years

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1996, 2006 and 2016.

Overall

English

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the English

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language

was spoken by the majority of people throughout

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the given time period.

Firstly

, it is clearly seen from the pie chart that

English

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the English

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language

was dominating any other

languages

Further

, during the year 1996, 60% of individuals were speaking in

English

which was more than half. Followed by it, only 23%. and 17%

residents

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of residents

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were using French and other non-official

languages

respectively. Apart from these, 22%

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speakers were speaking in French and 20% were speaking in other unknown

languages

in the year 2006.

However

, 58% of native people were communicating by

English

language

as it attained its peak. Afterwards, in 2016,

English

speakers were still holding the upper hand as 57%

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indigenious

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indigenous

Canadian folks were communicating through

English

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the English

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language

whereas

French and other

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non-official

languages

percentage

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percentages

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were almost equivalent

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21% and 22% respectively.

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The pie charts shows the number of native speakers of different languages in canada in 1996,2006 and 2016. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.

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