The bar chart below show the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make the comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart below show the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make the comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart illustrates the proportion of both male and female people in six different age groups in Australia doing regular physical activity in 2010.
Overall
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it is clear that
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most Australian women enjoy exercising more than men except the youngest
group
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.
Moreover
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, the trend between the first section ( 15-44 years old) and the second part ( 45 and over) is reversed.
To begin
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with, Australian male youngsters occupied 52.8%
while
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female adolescents were at 47.7%. In the next age
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, which was 25-34, the fraction of male adults dropped by roughly 10% but female individuals slightly shot up by 2%.
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, male athletes still decreased to 39.5% and female athletes escalated to 52.5% in the 35-44
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.
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, the percentage of both sexes in citizens around 45-54 years jumped to 53.3% and 43.1 respectively.
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, in 55-64 female population unnoticeably fell to 53%
besides
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the male population increased by 2%. In the
last
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group
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, both male and female Australians doing physical activity almost had the same ratio.
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