The line graph shows the percentages of Australian export with four countries. The graph below shows the percentage of Australian exports to 4 countries from 1990 to 2012 You should write at least 150 words.

The line graph shows the percentages of Australian export with four countries.

The graph below shows the percentage of Australian exports to 4 countries from 1990 to 2012

You should write at least 150 words.
The line graph illustrates the statistics on goods exported from Australia to four different countries in a 22-year period, starting in 1990.
Overall
, it is apparent that Australian
exports
to Japan and the US experienced a downward trend,
whereas
exports
to China and India witnessed considerable growth.
Initially
, in 1990,
exports
to Japan and America commenced at higher levels, with well over 10% and 25%, respectively. Japan's percentage decreased sharply to 20% in 1995. After that, it continued to gradually drop and finished at roughly 18%.
On the other hand
, the US number fell and rose over a decade,
then
dropped to its lowest point, just over 5%, before growing slightly
at the end
of the period.
Conversely
, China and India began with lower numbers, just under 5%.
While
the
exports
to India increased slightly, peaking at nearly 8% in 2010, and
dropped
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minimally afterwards, China's fraction rocketed throughout the period, reaching its peak at 30%, surpassing other countries, and securing the largest percentage.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Line graph
  • Percentage
  • Exports
  • Trend analysis
  • Upward/downward trend
  • Fluctuation
  • Comparison
  • Peak performance
  • Decline
  • Stability
  • Significant
  • Inferred
  • Global events
  • Economic context
  • Reflect
  • Influence
  • Patterns
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