The line graph shows the percentages of Australian export with four countries. The graph below shows the percentage of Australian exports to 4 countries from 1990 to 2012 You should write at least 150 words.
The line graph illustrates the statistics on goods exported from Australia to four different countries in a 22-year period, starting in 1990.
Overall
, it is apparent that Australian exports
to Japan and the US experienced a downward trend, whereas
exports
to China and India witnessed considerable growth.
Initially
, in 1990, exports
to Japan and America commenced at higher levels, with well over 10% and 25%, respectively. Japan's percentage decreased sharply to 20% in 1995. After that, it continued to gradually drop and finished at roughly 18%. On the other hand
, the US number fell and rose over a decade, then
dropped to its lowest point, just over 5%, before growing slightly at the end
of the period.
Conversely
, China and India began with lower numbers, just under 5%. While
the exports
to India increased slightly, peaking at nearly 8% in 2010, and dropped
minimally afterwards, China's fraction rocketed throughout the period, reaching its peak at 30%, surpassing other countries, and securing the largest percentage.Wrong verb form
dropping
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