The graph below shows different sources of air pollutants in the UK from 1990 to 2005. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. (20 mins

The graph demonstrates the three factors of

air

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pollution

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in the UK between 1990 and 2005. Three major factors are transport, industry, and

households

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. In 1990, the highest source that

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the

air

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pollutant is factory- approximately 5.8

million

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tons

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.

Households

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and vehicles are releasing the same

amount

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of pollutants- around 1.5

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tons

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. The

estimate

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total

amount

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of toxic

air

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generates

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in

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apply

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this

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year

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is 7.3

million

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tons

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.

Industry

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The industry

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gradually declines

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to produce

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the

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apply

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greenhouse

gases

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. The

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amount

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from the first

year

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and the

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year

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is almost 3 times. As

factory

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a factory

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generates

less

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fewer

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air

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pollutants, the total

amount

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of toxic

gases

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also

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reduces.

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,

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the house

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usage trend of the graph

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fluctuates

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. The

amount

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of

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pollutants

declines

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declined

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from

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1990 and 1996,but it

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between 1996 and 1999.

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,

households

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less

air

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pollution

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since 1999. The graph of vehicles is quite stable from the

last

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year

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until the

last

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year

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. The

amount

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of releasing

green house

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greenhouse

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gases

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is around 1.5

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tons

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per

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.

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,the trend of the summation of

air

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pollution

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line continually decreases every

year

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since the factory produces less

air

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pollutants. The main cause of

air

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pollution

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is firms.

Households

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produces

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the lowest number of harmful

gases

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among

three

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the three

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factors.