The bar chart below show the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010.

The bar chart demonstrates the bonus range among genders from six different maturity groups in Australia doing regular physical activity in 2010. Generally, the graph illustrates that, from their 25’s, women got the highest percentages

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exercising .

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, from 15 to 24, the men’s club got higher percentages than the

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faction with a little bit of difference.

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, later, the percentage of the

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line starts to increase.

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got 48.9% which is

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percentage than men’s. Later, male athletes still decrease in

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35-44 to the rate of 39.5. From the youth of 45 till 54 the

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tape got the pick point on the graph with 53.3%

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the interest in the male ring started to go up little by little.

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, in the next maturity club, dropped their superiority with a decline of 0.3%. After, the

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went down a bit more,

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increased more than before. Despite that, at the old age of 65 and over females got higher points than males with just 0.4%