The diagram illustrates the process that is used to manufacture bricks for the building industry. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevent.

The diagram illustrates the process that is used to manufacture bricks for the building industry. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevent.
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The chart demonstrates how bricks are produced for the construction industry.
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, the process contains several stages, starting with excavating clay, continuing with different mixing procedures, and ending with the distribution of finished goods. At the beginning of the process, the excavator is used to dig clays, and
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a grid is used to separate the sand from the metal to produce pure sand. After that, a moderate amount of water is added to the pure sand to make sure the mixture is neither too thick nor liquid.
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, the blend is cut by a wire cutter or moulded in the mould to get the bricks. In the fourth stage, the bricks are dried in the oven for one to two days.
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, these materials are heated inside the kiln at two temperature levels, from 200 degrees Celsius to 980 degrees Celsius at a moderate level and up to 1300 degrees Celsius at a high one. Before being packed, they are stored in the cooling chamber for 48 to 72 hours. The process concludes with the
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the final products to its consumers by trucks.
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