The line graph shows the changes in the number of overseas tourists in three different regions (coast, lakes, and mountains) in each country in Europe. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and making comparisons where relevant.

The line graph shows the changes in the number of overseas tourists in three different regions (coast, lakes, and mountains) in each country in Europe. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and making comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph illustrates how many overseas tourists travelled to three different areas namely the
coast
, lakes and mountains in a European country from 1987 to 2007.
Overall
, the
number
of overseas visitors visiting the
coast
and mountains increased
while
that of the lakes experienced a decrease.
In addition
, the
number
of visitors who travelled the
coast
witnessed the most significant change in comparison to the other two areas. The 1987-2002 period experienced a significant increase in the
number
of overseas tourists visiting the lakes from 10
thousand
people
to over 70
thousand
people
.
However
,
this
figure fell considerably over the next 5
years
to only 50
thousand
people
in 2007. In 1987, only 20
thousand
overseas visitors travelled to the mountains,
then
it witnessed a steady rise to over 30
thousand
people
during the following 10
years
.
However
,
this
figure proceeded with slight growth over the next 10
years
to around 40
thousand
people
in 2007. Between 1987 and 1992, there was a gradual decrease in the
number
of
people
visiting the
coast
from 40
thousand
people
to around 35
thousand
people
but it witnessed a quick increase to around 80
thousand
people
during the following 15
years
.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however".
Vocabulary: Replace the words coast, number, thousand, people, years with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 2 times.
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