The line graph shows the changes in the number of overseas tourists in three different regions (coast, lakes, and mountains) in each country in Europe. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and making comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph illustrates how many overseas tourists travelled to three different areas namely the
coast
, lakes and mountains in a European country from 1987 to 2007.
Overall
, the number
of overseas visitors visiting the coast
and mountains increased while
that of the lakes experienced a decrease. In addition
, the number
of visitors who travelled the coast
witnessed the most significant change in comparison to the other two areas.
The 1987-2002 period experienced a significant increase in the number
of overseas tourists visiting the lakes from 10 thousand
people
to over 70 thousand
people
. However
, this
figure fell considerably over the next 5 years
to only 50 thousand
people
in 2007. In 1987, only 20 thousand
overseas visitors travelled to the mountains, then
it witnessed a steady rise to over 30 thousand
people
during the following 10 years
. However
, this
figure proceeded with slight growth over the next 10 years
to around 40 thousand
people
in 2007.
Between 1987 and 1992, there was a gradual decrease in the number
of people
visiting the coast
from 40 thousand
people
to around 35 thousand
people
but it witnessed a quick increase to around 80 thousand
people
during the following 15 years
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