The line graph shows the changes in the number of overseas tourists in three different regions (coast, lakes, and mountains) in each country in Europe. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and making comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph illustrates how many overseas tourists travelled to three different areas namely the
coast
, lakes and mountains in a European country from 1987 to 2007.
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Overall
, the Linking Words
number
of overseas visitors visiting the Use synonyms
coast
and mountains increased Use synonyms
while
that of the lakes experienced a decrease. Linking Words
In addition
, the Linking Words
number
of visitors who travelled the Use synonyms
coast
witnessed the most significant change in comparison to the other two areas.
The 1987-2002 period experienced a significant increase in the Use synonyms
number
of overseas tourists visiting the lakes from 10 Use synonyms
thousand
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people
to over 70 Use synonyms
thousand
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people
. Use synonyms
However
, Linking Words
this
figure fell considerably over the next 5 Linking Words
years
to only 50 Use synonyms
thousand
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people
in 2007. In 1987, only 20 Use synonyms
thousand
overseas visitors travelled to the mountains, Use synonyms
then
it witnessed a steady rise to over 30 Linking Words
thousand
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people
during the following 10 Use synonyms
years
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However
, Linking Words
this
figure proceeded with slight growth over the next 10 Linking Words
years
to around 40 Use synonyms
thousand
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people
in 2007.
Between 1987 and 1992, there was a gradual decrease in the Use synonyms
number
of Use synonyms
people
visiting the Use synonyms
coast
from 40 Use synonyms
thousand
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people
to around 35 Use synonyms
thousand
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people
but it witnessed a quick increase to around 80 Use synonyms
thousand
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people
during the following 15 Use synonyms
years
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