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The charts below show the percentages of men and women aged 60-64 in employment in four countries in 1970 and 2000 Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.

The charts below show the percentages of men and women aged 60-64 in employment in four countries in 1970 and 2000 Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.
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The given figure illustrates the
percentage
 of men and women who are in
age
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the age
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 group of 60 to 64 in employment in four different
nation
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nations
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 in the years 1970 and 2000 . It has been observed that
,
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the
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Japan had the highest
percentage
 of
employement
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employment
 in both
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years
whereas
 Belgium had decreased drastically and in the case of Australia and
USA
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the USA
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 they had decreased a little bit . In the case of Japan it had 84% in the year 1970 but declined to 76% in 2000 which is still
highest
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 when compared to the other nations
on the other hand
 Belgium had 79% in 1970 but it declined by 60% by 2000 which is the least
percentage
 of employment among all . Australia and USA had almost
same
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percentage
 and differed by just 1% in the year 1970 but in
further
 years the
percentage
 of Australia
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declined to 47% in 2000 which
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was comparitavely
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comparitavely
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comparatively
 less than
USA
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the USA
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 which had just decreased to 55% .
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Vocabulary: Replace the words percentage with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "declined" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 3 times.
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