The charts below show the percentages of men and women aged 60-64 in employment in four countries in 1970 and 2000 Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.

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percentage

of men and women who are in

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group of 60 to 64 in employment in four different

nation

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nations

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in the years 1970 and 2000 . It has been observed that

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the

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Japan had the highest

percentage

of

employement

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employment

in both

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years

whereas

Belgium had decreased drastically and in the case of Australia and

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they had decreased a little bit . In the case of Japan it had 84% in the year 1970 but declined to 76% in 2000 which is still

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when compared to the other nations

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Belgium had 79% in 1970 but it declined by 60% by 2000 which is the least

percentage

of employment among all . Australia and USA had almost

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percentage

and differed by just 1% in the year 1970 but in

further

years the

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of Australia

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declined to 47% in 2000 which

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comparatively

less than

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which had just decreased to 55% .