The bar chart shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2021. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar graph
discuss
the statistics rank of the electricity amount produced and consumed by ten different Change the verb form
discusses
countries
in 2021.
Overall
, Correct article usage
the unitaded
unitaded
states and Correct your spelling
united
china
Capitalize word
China
that
are developing Correct pronoun usage
apply
countries
faced the
excessive Correct article usage
apply
amount
in production and consumption Fix the agreement mistake
amounts
electricity
in 2021 , Change preposition
of electricity
while
other coutries
are Correct your spelling
countries
very
less,Rephrase
much
that
shows huge differences with considerable Correct pronoun usage
which
gap
. Fix the agreement mistake
gaps
In addition
, we can notice that there is no clear difference between producing and consuming electric power
in the 10 countries
.
Marover
, the number Correct your spelling
Moreover
produces
Change preposition
of produced
electricy
Correct your spelling
electricity
for
Change preposition
in
US
and Correct article usage
the US
china
are nearly the same for 4099 and 5398 respectively . Capitalize word
China
On the other hand
, the quantity of cosuming
in these Correct your spelling
consumption
countries
are
3866 and 5322 for each of them .
Correct subject-verb agreement
is
In contrast
, the left eight countries
have less electricity production and consumption that never exceed
1057 in producing Correct subject-verb agreement
exceeds
power
and no more than 1038 . Further more
, the lowest country was Correct your spelling
Furthermore
korea
Change the capitalization
Korea
in
485.1 producing Change preposition
with
power
and 449.5 consuming power
. We can note that all these eight countries
faced approximatly
Correct your spelling
approximately
same
numbers of production and Correct article usage
the same
cosumption
.Correct your spelling
consumption
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