The graph below shows a comparison between the unemployment rate and the number of people leaving Ireland from 1988 to 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph shows information about
correlation
Add an article
the correlation
of
the percentage of Change preposition
between
people
without the
work and the number of Correct article usage
apply
people
, who left Ireland, over a twenty-year period between 1988 and 2008.
Overall
, what stands out from the graph is that maximum
points for both considered categories were in 1988, and the number of fluctuations led to the almost lowest Correct article usage
the maximum
percent
of citizens with no work Replace the word
percentage
at
the Change preposition
in
last
year on the graph.
Looking at the details, as regards the unemployment curve, there was a sharp fall from 17% to around 12% in 1990 and subsequent
rise to approximately 15% in 1992. Correct article usage
a subsequent
After
this
point
the line declined steadily until it gained its minimum of around 5% in 2004.Add a comma
point,
Then
the slightly
rise finished the analysis of the rate at 6%. If we look at the line which Change the adverb
slight
is describing
Wrong verb form
describes
another
information, the trend was almost similar till 2004, with Correct quantifier usage
other
sharp
drop from around 65,000 in 1988 to 35,000 Add an article
a sharp
the sharp
people
in 1992. Then
after several variations, which lasted for 10 years, there was a significant increase in the number of people
leaving Ireland, that
reached approximately 55,000 in 2008.Correct pronoun usage
which
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