The bar chart shows the proportion of people aged over 65 years old in Germany, Canada, and the UK over a period of 50 years.

The bar chart shows the proportion of people aged over 65 years old in Germany, Canada, and the UK over a period of 50 years.
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The diagram below illustrates the percentage of citizens who are over 65 in 3 countries from 1980 to 2030.
Overall
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, Germany is considered a country in which most elders have been living, in parallel, the amount of others is still ambiguous since in 1980 UK outweighed Canada
while
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50 years later the result has shifted.
Firstly
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, in 1980, around 15% of German were aged, followed by those, British at approximately 14% and Canadians at 10%
subsequently
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,
nevertheless
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, at the beginning of the 20s, the country found most elders were still the same, reached 20%, but the number of other realms was equal at 15%.
Secondly
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, the projection indicates that the sum of all countries mentioned will ascend drastically, in Germany, a quarter of the whole state will be the aged crowds,
besides
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that, the quantity of those living in Canada will increase up to 23% more than the UK in 2030.

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