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The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010.

The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010.
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The bar graph indicates the amount of Australian
males
 and females in percentage in various
age
 groups based on their regular physical activity in The year 2010.
Overall
, the number of females doing regular physical exercise in Australia was higher than
males
 in all
age
 groups, except
group
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groups
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 15 to 24. The least difference in percentage of their exercise routine could be seen in
age
group
 65 and over, and
on the
contrary
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 the greatest one was in
group
 35 to 44. As can be seen, in 2010 in Australia, in the
age
group
 25-34, just above 42
percent
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per cent
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 of men had a regular exercise plan,
while
 women outnumbered them by almost 49%.
Subsequently
, for 35 to 44, these numbers were 39.5 and 52.5
percent
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per cent
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 respectively. In
age
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the age
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group
 45-54 female participants went for 53.3%,
while
males
 were there for 43.1%. In
55
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-64
group
 as well the number of women was higher than men by
near
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 8%.
Additionally
, The percentage of men exercising regularly in
age
group
 65 and over was 46.7%, which was almost the same as the number of women in that category
that
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 was 47.1%.
age
group
 15-24 was the only classification, in which, the
amount
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number
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 of
males
 engaged in physical activity outnumbered females by almost 5
percent
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per cent
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.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words males, age, group with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 3 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Physical activity
  • Regular exercise
  • Age demographics
  • Participation rate
  • Trend analysis
  • Gender disparity
  • Health initiatives
  • Public health policies
  • Statistical comparison
  • Lifestyle choices
  • Work commitments
  • Age-related factors
  • Preventative health
  • Exercise habits
  • Surveillance data
  • Motivators and barriers
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