The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010.
The bar graph indicates the amount of Australian
males
and females in percentage in various Use synonyms
age
groups based on their regular physical activity in The year 2010.
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Overall
, the number of females doing regular physical exercise in Australia was higher than Linking Words
males
in all Use synonyms
age
groups, except Use synonyms
Use synonyms
group
15 to 24. The least difference in percentage of their exercise routine could be seen in Fix the agreement mistake
groups
age
Use synonyms
group
65 and over, and Use synonyms
on the
Linking Words
contrary
the greatest one was in Add a comma
contrary,
group
35 to 44.
As can be seen, in 2010 in Australia, in the Use synonyms
age
Use synonyms
group
25-34, just above 42 Use synonyms
percent
of men had a regular exercise plan, Change the spelling
per cent
while
women outnumbered them by almost 49%. Linking Words
Subsequently
, for 35 to 44, these numbers were 39.5 and 52.5 Linking Words
percent
respectively. In Change the spelling
per cent
Use synonyms
age
Add an article
the age
group
45-54 female participants went for 53.3%, Use synonyms
while
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males
were there for 43.1%. In Use synonyms
55
-64 Correct article usage
the 55
group
as well the number of women was higher than men by Use synonyms
near
8%.
Change the word
nearly
Additionally
, The percentage of men exercising regularly in Linking Words
age
Use synonyms
group
65 and over was 46.7%, which was almost the same as the number of women in that category Use synonyms
that
was 47.1%. Correct pronoun usage
which
age
Use synonyms
group
15-24 was the only classification, in which, the Use synonyms
amount
of Change the quantifier
number
males
engaged in physical activity outnumbered females by almost 5 Use synonyms
percent
.Change the spelling
per cent
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 3 times.
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