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The line graph shows the number of customers in four restaurants between 1990 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graph shows the number of customers in four restaurants between 1990 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The supplied line graph illustrates how many people went
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 three different restaurants over a
twenty year
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 period. A glance at the graph reveals that
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the number of customers who tried Fish and Chips and Hamburger restaurants had an upward trend,
However
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 there was a modest decrease
for
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 eating pizza in
restaurant
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restaurants
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 over the period. In 1970,the
quantity
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 of customers
for
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eating Fish and Chips was just under 100.
Following
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 there was a significant rise and it rocketed to accurately 500 in 1990.(Which was the maximum
numbers
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 in that whole
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.)
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 the number of people who had Hamburger was roughly 50 in 1970.(Which was the minimum amount over the total years).After which it
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 at nearly 300 in 1990. As regards restaurants which
was
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included pizza,the average of users was almost 300 in 1970 and
then
 it faced a moderate decline in the next twenty years and it reached
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just over 200 in 1990.
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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • fluctuated
  • steady rise
  • declined gradually
  • significant growth
  • overtook
  • peaked at
  • dipped to
  • remained stable
  • saw a surge in
  • experienced a slump
  • outperformed
  • lagged behind
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