The line graph shows the number of customers in four restaurants between 1990 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The supplied line graph illustrates how many people went
in
three different restaurants over a Change preposition
to
twenty year
period.
A glance at the graph reveals thatAdd a hyphen
twenty-year
,
the number of customers who tried Fish and Chips and Hamburger restaurants had an upward trend,Remove the comma
apply
Linking Words
However
there was a modest decrease Add a comma
However,
for
eating pizza in Change preposition
in
restaurant
over the period.
In 1970,the Fix the agreement mistake
restaurants
quantity
of customers Change the quantifier
number
for
eating Fish and Chips was just under 100.Change preposition
apply
Following
Linking Words
Linking Words
this
there was a significant rise and it rocketed to accurately 500 in 1990.(Which was the maximum Add a comma
this,
numbers
in that whole Fix the agreement mistake
number
years
.)Fix the agreement mistake
year
Linking Words
similarly
the number of people who had Hamburger was roughly 50 in 1970.(Which was the minimum amount over the total years).After which it Add a comma
similarly,
packed
at nearly 300 in 1990.
As regards restaurants which Verb problem
peaked
was
included pizza,the average of users was almost 300 in 1970 and Unnecessary verb
apply
then
it faced a moderate decline in the next twenty years and it reached Linking Words
to
just over 200 in 1990.Change preposition
apply
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