he line graph show the amount of shop closures and openings in a particular nation from 2011 to 2018.

he line graph show the amount of shop closures and openings in a particular nation from 2011 to 2018.
Contained in the line graph is information pertaining to the amount of shop closures and openings in a particular nation from 2011 to 2018.
Overall
, it can be observed that both closures and openings witnessed a downtrend trajectory.
Additionally
, the number of closed
shops
was always higher than
shops
that opened, with the exception of 2011 and 2015. Taking closely at the closure of
shops
, it is evident that it reached a peak in 2013
while
hitting to dip in the next two years. Beginning with 2011, when the number of
shops
that closed stood at approximately 6,500 before increasing to around 7,100 in 2013.
This
was followed by a sharp decline from around 6,500 in 2014 to just over 600 in 2015.
Subsequently
,
this
figure surged to around 5,100 in the final year of the timeframe. Moving on to the figure of opening
shops
, it commenced with nearly 8,500
then
experienced a downward trend to approximately half with 4000 in 2012.
In contrast
, it was followed by an increase to 6,200 in 2014 after that
this
figure saw a decrease and accounted for 3000
at the end
of the period.
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